The title of my poem is name "Determination". It says in about 15 lines what determination is and how it impacts our lives. The visuals of this poem are actually next to none because I hadn't done my homework and kept track of it. It could of been a lot better, as I planned it to be, but overall it was just my fault. The main reason I had done this was to express how we get the best of ourselves and push ourselves to our limit.
The special effects, audio and colors are supposed to make the audience relate to it. I know I've done this in the past, the whole reason it is being written. I wished to make the audience feel as if this is their life, as if they have been in this same scenario before. When writing the actual poem I related to my feelings, and everything I've written in the poem was true. I hoped it would be for everybody else, thus the entire idea behind the poem.
No, I am not happy at all with my results. I am 100% certain that I could of done better, I didn't put forth my full effort. I am aware I could of done MUCH better, however I didn't do my homework and shoot with the camera every night. I wish it turned out the way I wanted it to, although it didn't and thats why I am not proud of the poem.
Compliment:The poem was awesome
ReplyDeleteArea of Improvement:The poem was cut off in the beginning
Compliment:THe music was really energetic
good starting point
ReplyDeletecover the blacks
good audio
you read your poem nicely, need b-roll, good text layovers
ReplyDeleteCompliment: Good Lyrics
ReplyDeleteCriticism: bad B-roll
Compliment: Good Audio
good lyrics
ReplyDeleteneeds to double check for misplaced pictures
good visuals
Really nice poem.
ReplyDeleteI think more b-roll would be nice.
Nice time lapse.
good poem like the meaning
ReplyDeleteneeds original b-roll
good audio balance
You had great audio, you recited your poem very clearly.
ReplyDeleteYou definatly need more b-roll, you used way too many of the Final cut backgrounds.
Other than that I liked your poems mood and theme.
I like how the music doesn't start right away
ReplyDeleteThe mic kind of puffs when you speak.
I love the figurative language of the poem
I loved your poem meaning but you barely have any b-roll! Really cool shot of the clouds though.
ReplyDeleteI like your voice over.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is to have more pictures or videos that you take.
I also like how you got the clouds moving.
I like the content of your A-roll.
ReplyDeleteI think you could have added more B-roll.
I really like the content of your A-roll.
audio roll was great
ReplyDeleteNo comment because there were no visuals through out the poem
Maybe one or two good visuals
nice audio
ReplyDeletehad parts that were not covered
good voice over
Audio was clear
ReplyDeleteYou need to take photos and film
Nicely done!
I like the words you used.
ReplyDeleteYou could have added way more b-roll and the music was loud and was only used in in one spot.
I also like the music.
Your audio was good I could hear it really well
ReplyDeleteSome parts weren't covered with B-roll, there wasn't much b-roll
I liked the picture of the wild fire.
Nice voice over
ReplyDeleteLots of little errors like the a roll was shown and there wasn't much b-roll
I like the inspiring words you put up
audio was good
ReplyDeleteneed to take pics and film
nice job
Good B-Roll.
ReplyDeleteI see you had to use B-Roll from Final Cut, and you didn't use the latch tool so your b-roll didn't fit tight together.
Good Audio
Love the lyrics of your poem. Could have got more visual shots to go along with your poem. Great background music.
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem. In between there is some film of when you were recording you poem. The music went along with your poem
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